About 6 months ago I found out that I was gonna be an uncle, it was a little late when I found out. I was so excited. And then when we heard that Braiden was born, I was anxious to meet him. When we drove to the hospital a day later, my brother, who I hadn't seen in 2 months, had some weird mohawk. But the baby was so little, I passed up the offer to hold him cause I thought that I would of dropped him.
After about 2 months he started to be able to hold up his head and he is experimenting with his vocal cords so he will start doing his "gaga" language and he'll just start to shout. He likes to grab his feet. When I start to hold him he tends to poop. One day I was holding him and talking to him and he kicked me in the jaw. It didn't hurt that much but it was funny. I am so happy I have a nephew. COMMENT PLEASE!!!!
The comment about him pooping lightened the mood, but in my opinion you should have typed out the word two, as it kind of makes the article look choppy. (I just felt like commenting)
ReplyDeletewas this your second memoir?
ReplyDeleteI liked how you described how he talked, but you should go into more detail about how you felt when you found out that you were going to be an uncle, but other than that it was really good.
congrats on being an uncle.
Not really descriptive. I liked when you told us about you not wanting to hold him cause you thought you'd drop him. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteCongrats on being an uncle bud. Gonna be should be going to be. But other than that, I like your work. Very well written.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. Adios
ReplyDeleteI think you should describe things more. Congrats son
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