I was so excited about getting my new bike. My dad was gonna take me there because my grades weren't bad. So when we got in the car I had butterflys in my gut, I have no idea why, but it was gonna take like 20 minutes to get there.
I couldn't stop talking the whole way there. But then when I got inside I had to close my mouth, it reeked like three day old milk. So we started looking around at all the cool bikes. I saw this one that I thought was so cool. It turns out it was a chick bike. So then I chose another one, also a chick bike. Finally, I found a dark blue diamondback. It was so cool to me.
So then as my dad was buying it, I still looked around at all the cool stuff. There was gloves, kneepads, elbowpads, lame helmets. My dad called me over so I could pick out a lock. So after we bought it we had to put it in the back of my dads truck. I was running everywhere, filled with excitement. I almost got run over but I didn't care. When we finally got to my house I hopped on my bike and rode for about half an hour before I went inside to eat. I still have it to this day. PLEASE COMMENT
Your bike would not have done much good if you had gotten run over.
ReplyDeleteI like how you talked about how you felt about getting a bike. You could've described the bike more.
ReplyDeleteI like the detail about the three day old milk. Something I wanted to know was when did this happen?
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